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my name is aiden lee ([personal profile] donghae) wrote2009-02-04 10:52 pm

☞ icon critique meme

ICONCRITMEME

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♠ reply to this post with your username and/or journal you post your icons at. along with that, post 5-12 icon samples, so everyone can give you some of their thoughts too.

♡ reply to people's ( even people that you aren't familiar with an outsider's perspective is good ) comments with critiques and opinions on their icons. anonymous comments are enabled and ip logging is disabled, if you feel you need to use that option.

♣ try to be polite, but at the same time honest. the purpose of this meme is to be helpful, so any wank will be deleted.

♢ pimp this out in your journal and/or icon community, etcetera.

[identity profile] so-vayne.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] so_vayne @ [livejournal.com profile] seaverse... older icons @ [livejournal.com profile] tinamakesicons.

I just can't resist these memes. Hit me with your best shot. ♥

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[identity profile] restlessme.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
I think these are gorgeous.
Not to fond of the second icon, it seems to saturated and contrasted, to me.

[identity profile] gunshou.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
You're one of my iconning inspirations - I love how you put compositions together and creatively utilize resources. 2, 5, and 7 here are great examples of how well you use textures and color - 5 is one of my favorite icons ever, and I can never manage to use the damn lace textures as well as you did on 7, even though it's so simple.

Your typography is always amazing, even if it's just textures that are well-placed, like in 8.

Your coloring is something I wish I could replicate - 4, 6, and 8 stand out here as realistic but vivid coloring, and 2 is saved from being overbusy by that rich red-orange.

A few of these have some fading elements that make the icon difficult to focus on, though - although I blame my poor eyesight. The ghostly Vaynes on 3, the bright white cloud on the left in 5, and the somewhat blotchy lights in 6 are a bit distracting. But, monitor and eye issues, you know?

TL;DR LOVE YOUR STUFF! ♥

[identity profile] lamentado.livejournal.com 2009-03-05 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
I personally LOVE the second icon, but that's just me and my obsession with saturation, which probably isn't always a good thing.

These icons are beautiful, and I love each and every one of them. Good job! :D

[identity profile] imcy.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
all very lovely ^^ and I especially love the Jin ones XD
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[identity profile] peace-of-hope.livejournal.com 2009-02-22 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you have a really find command of the medium and a wide range of icons (from anime/manga to real life). However, there is a bit of an overuse of channel mixer, it looks like. Nothing wrong with using that technique, just in some of these they're too blue all over (the Nana Kitade icon is pretty, but it's too blue and there isn't enough contrast between the background and her face). You have some use of textures, which it's good that you know when and where to use them, but sometimes icons do need a little more than just coloring. On a more personal level, I'm not a fan of manga icons that include the original text. Yes, it takes some time to erase and fix the art, but there are creative ways of cropping, etc. Just explore that option. There's a good range of composition but it still mainly focuses on the face. Try some more asymmetrical approaches or utilize the negative space. Experiment with spit screen or not showing all of the face as well.

Overall, very nice icons and your style is evident, at least to me. You should be proud of these. :)

[identity profile] beppin14.livejournal.com 2009-02-23 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Frankly, I think all your icons are gorgeous. ♥
Unfortunately, I can't give you a good "critique", since I fail at graphics. BUT ANYWAY. I love them. Hope that at least does something for your ego? :D
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[identity profile] peace-of-hope.livejournal.com 2009-02-22 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
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[identity profile] lamentado.livejournal.com 2009-03-05 04:23 am (UTC)(link)
Oh gosh the depth in the third one made me melt in my skin.

I really like your icons- some of them are simpler than the others, but I find that I enjoy all of them, through and through.

Still staring at the third one, which is pretty much epic win in 100 x 100.
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[identity profile] mertonfanatic.livejournal.com 2009-02-27 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Eh why not? I post at [livejournal.com profile] xmoonlitnightx and I'm always late to the party.

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[identity profile] rei4-teddy.livejournal.com 2009-03-09 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
love the greenish coloring and the "why so serious" one =]
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[identity profile] lamentado.livejournal.com 2009-03-05 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
I like it for the most part, but I'm not a fan of the dots on your Edward Elric icon, and the Tanemura icon has just too much on it.

I like the Tsubasa icons though, they're very cute. :D My suggestion is to perhaps add some more color adjustments, to make the colors a little more vivid and such- but that's just personal taste. :>

[identity profile] songbirdapostle.livejournal.com 2009-03-05 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!

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[identity profile] erase-away.livejournal.com 2009-03-07 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd love some critique. Though I'm incredibly late.



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[identity profile] x-falsetto.livejournal.com 2009-03-09 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the use of text and textures on your icons.
Nice coloring as well. (:

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[identity profile] danielachan.livejournal.com 2009-03-09 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
To start with-I adore your icons.
I really love the cropping and the way you keep your icons simple and clean.

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[identity profile] vicinity-love.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
great colouring !
and your pictures are not 'too much' or over the top. they're simple and nice :D

[identity profile] thistwilight.livejournal.com 2009-06-30 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
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